martes, 22 de noviembre de 2011

Una redacción que hice.

"Normally, when people have to write a text describing a friend, they describe her or his best friend. This time, I will describe a person that some time ago was my best friend. He was my really best friend.

I met him last year because we were in the same class. He was very similar to me.
He is sixteen years old and lives in Talavera with her mother.
He's handsome an slim. He has got spiky an dark hair an his eyes are light brown, like honey. He's fit because he loves sport.

He was funny. He loved rap and reggae music like me. His favorites films were the Saw Saga. He like swimming, boxing and basket. He love going with his friends enywhere.

When I began to know him thoroughly, he was very talkative and helpful. He wasgergeous. He was similar to me because, for example, we always though the same. He was generous, funny, kind, lovely, impulsive and very important to me. He used say that I was his soulmate.

Months passed and we became best friends. He told me all his problems, everything that happened in his day after day. A month later, he become my boyfriend. Everything was perfect, but we broke up in August. We are still friends.

The following month, he began to change. He was serious when talking to me...
This month, my friends told me some things that he tolds about me. This things aren't good. I wanted to talk with him, but then I discovered that he isn't like he used to be. He's completly different to me. Nowadays, he's an unknown person for me,

What is his name? His name is Paul; for me, he was Pablitoh. Now, his name is "Unknown""

¿Te acuerdas de la redacción en la que saque el nueve? esta es...
El profesor lloró al leerla, y se la dio a la teacher que se dio cuenta de todo....

4 comentarios:

  1. Me has dejado sin palabras. Es una redacción genial, aunque una pena que todo haya cambiado así :(

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